{"id":6303,"date":"2023-09-13T14:30:57","date_gmt":"2023-09-13T18:30:57","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/wayneaenglish.com\/WP\/?p=6303"},"modified":"2023-09-13T14:30:57","modified_gmt":"2023-09-13T18:30:57","slug":"show-dont-tell","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wayneaenglish.com\/WordPress\/android\/show-dont-tell\/","title":{"rendered":"Paint A Picture With Words"},"content":{"rendered":"\n\n\n
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D<\/span>on\u2019t say it\u2019s a beautiful day. Don\u2019t say the sunset was lovely. Don\u2019t say the woman or man was good looking. Rather show it, by writing a picture in a few words that allows the reader to make a mental picture. As Alfred Hitchcock said when asked why his scenes were not more violent, he said that was because what the viewer conceived was far more powerful that anything he could put on the screen.<\/p>\n

\nFor example:<\/p>\n

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    \nNo: It\u2019s a beautiful day
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    Yes: As the sun rose over the horizon it poured light and warmth into the world making the ice and snow sparkle. That kind of a day. Made you glad to be alive.<\/p>\n

    No: The sunset was lovely
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    Yes: Don\u2019t use \u2018was\u2019 couch your description in the present. And and don\u2019t use the passive \u2018was.\u2019<\/p>\n

    \tThe sunset was red and yellow and purple. It\u2019s rays blasted the clouds into a spectrum of dark and light silhouette in the sky. The late afternoon sun painting the trees a magnificent green.<\/p>\n

    No: The Man or Woman is good looking.
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    Yes: He was six feet tall. Dark hair. Wearing a tailored suit over a toned and athletic figure. Did I say he had blue eyes? I blinked. Did a double take. That\u2019s when I noticed the rest. Blue eyes, long dark lashes.<\/p>\n

    See the difference? Show don\u2019t tell.<\/p>\n<\/ul>\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

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