{"id":3400,"date":"2019-09-23T09:00:09","date_gmt":"2019-09-23T13:00:09","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/wayneaenglish.com\/WP\/?p=3400"},"modified":"2019-09-23T09:00:09","modified_gmt":"2019-09-23T13:00:09","slug":"show-and-tell-cheat-sheet-from-writers-digest","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/wayneaenglish.com\/WordPress\/writing\/show-and-tell-cheat-sheet-from-writers-digest\/","title":{"rendered":"Show and Tell Cheat Sheet From Writers Digest"},"content":{"rendered":"<h1 style=\"text-shadow: 0px 0px 10px grey; text-align: center;\"><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">Show and Tell Cheat Sheet <\/span><\/h1>\n<h1 style=\"text-shadow: 0px 0px 10px grey; text-align: center;\"><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">From Writer\u2019s Digest <\/span><\/h1>\n<h1 style=\"text-shadow: 0px 0px 10px grey; text-align: center;\"><span style=\"color: #ff0000;\">July &#8211; August 2018 Issue<br \/>\n<\/span><\/h1>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p style=\"text-indent: 1px;\"><span style=\"margin-bottom: -12px; float: left; color: red; font-size: 75px; line-height: 70px; padding-right: 8px; padding-left: 3px; font-family: Georgia; text-shadow: 0px 0px 10px grey;\">C<\/span>reating characters can be a pleasure or the bane of writers everywhere. Below is a terrific aid from Writers Digest. While we&#8217;re talking about characters. do you keep a file of names? I&#8217;ve gotten names from:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>license plates<\/li>\n<li>street signs<\/li>\n<li>newspapers<\/li>\n<li>product names<\/li>\n<li>misspellings at the keyboard &#8211; Ufudi, is from a tangle of typing. He&#8217;s an Egyptian in my historical novel.<\/li>\n<li>from words that pop into my mind<\/li>\n<li>anywhere is fare game<\/li>\n<li>be sure to carry some paper and a pen.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<table border=\"1px\" width=\"100%\" cellspacing=\"0\" cellpadding=\"0\">\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">A character\u2019s emotional<br \/>\nresponse<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Show<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">Don\u2019t tell readers a character was ashamed or joyful;<br \/>\nshow them reactions<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">A characters Attitude<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Show<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">Rather than explain a character is uptight or<br \/>\njudgmental, show them acting that way or reveal it<br \/>\nthrough lines of dialogue.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">A character\u2019s special<br \/>\nskills of abilities<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Show<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">Don\u2019t tell readers what a great fighter the character is; render a fight scene in which something meaningful is at stake.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">Status (dominance \/<br \/>\nsubmission)<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Show<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">Instead of telling readers which character is in charge of<br \/>\nwho has the highest status, reveal it through stillness,<br \/>\nself-control, confidence and self-assurance.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">Tension and suspense<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Show<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">The more you claim that something is suspenseful of<br \/>\ntense, the less it will be. Instead, build tension through<br \/>\nengendering reader empathy and concern for characters<br \/>\nin peril.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">Desire (a character\u2019s<br \/>\ngoal or intention within<br \/>\na scene)<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Show<br \/>\nor Tell<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">If you show, do so quickly and clearly. Otherwise, just<br \/>\nhave the character state what she\u2019s trying to accomplish.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">A progression of events<br \/>\nthat doesn\u2019t change the<br \/>\ncharacter\u2019s attitude,<br \/>\nstatus or situation.<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Tell<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\">If nothing tilts the core scenes of your book. Play them<br \/>\nout. Show your characters facing struggles, taking<br \/>\naction, meeting setbacks and recalibrating before<br \/>\nmoving forward again toward their ursuit.<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\">Stakes<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\">Tell<\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Tell readers what will happen if the characters are<br \/>\nunsuccessful. Be as specific as possible, calling attention<br \/>\nto deadlines when appropriate. <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">A character\u2019s<br \/>\nappearance\u00a0 <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Show<br \/>\nby<br \/>\nTelling <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Tell readers the details of a character\u2019s hair and clothing,<br \/>\nbut keep it relevant; the details you include should<br \/>\ndemonstrate to readers something about the character\u2019s<br \/>\nculture, class or individual style. <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<tr>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"28%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Decisions <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"11%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Show<br \/>\nor Tell <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<td style=\"padding: 15px; font-size: 12pt;\" valign=\"top\" width=\"61%\"><span style=\"font-family: 'Georgia', serif;\"><span style=\"font-size: 12pt;\">Often, it\u2019s best to just tell readers what your characters<br \/>\nhave decided to do; however, context might provide you<br \/>\nunobtrusive ways to show them. <\/span><\/span><\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Show and Tell Cheat Sheet From Writer\u2019s Digest July &#8211; August 2018 Issue &nbsp; Creating characters can be a pleasure or the bane of writers everywhere. 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